This reading was about how important is to be really descriptive in writing. Some of the advices that it express is to describe every part of what you are writing in words that can help the reader to get connect with the text and can understand what you want to express and what you want them to feel. Also it clearly explains that is really important to use words that are not common like beautiful, nice, etc. because these words will not be helpful for the people who are reading what you wrote. So instead of using them, use words that would help the reader to imagine the moment or whatever is what you want to describe.

 It also gives some examples in how the writing looks like when you are writing with common words and are not using descriptive words. Then it gives you the same writhing but with more descriptive. So this way it helps you to see how important is to describe and express what you want to show to the readers in you reading. In other words the better you use descriptive words in your writing the better you writing is going to be.